Comments on: Elisheva (Epilogue) http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/elisheva-epilogue/ Biblical Microfictions by Joseph Zitt Sat, 18 Jul 2009 04:24:50 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: The Path of the Bookseller : The Book of Voices: Completed http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/elisheva-epilogue/#comment-289 The Path of the Bookseller : The Book of Voices: Completed Sat, 16 May 2009 20:26:10 +0000 http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/?p=77#comment-289 [...] finished writing the opening and closing segments of The Book of [...] [...] finished writing the opening and closing segments of The Book of [...]

]]> By: bookofvoices http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/elisheva-epilogue/#comment-288 bookofvoices Fri, 15 May 2009 15:23:27 +0000 http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/?p=77#comment-288 Thanks! And that's a good point. THe phrase didn't quite feel right to me either. I'll fix it in a rewrite. Thanks!

And that’s a good point. THe phrase didn’t quite feel right to me either. I’ll fix it in a rewrite.

]]> By: John Cowan http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/2009/05/14/elisheva-epilogue/#comment-287 John Cowan Fri, 15 May 2009 15:17:37 +0000 http://bookofvoices.wordpress.com/?p=77#comment-287 Superb! The only trouble I had was with the phrase "precise reversals of the truth", which doesn't fit a man telling a story to a young girl. "The exact opposite of the truth", perhaps? Superb!

The only trouble I had was with the phrase “precise reversals of the truth”, which doesn’t fit a man telling a story to a young girl. “The exact opposite of the truth”, perhaps?

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